Abandoned Nests
A chill, and then fever again... The hollow shade and share of shadows roost, grown thick in sleep for which the mind is branded by its own conjurings Of such an imperfect loss that heart's devils...
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I'm afraid Neil Gaimen has indelibly marked upon my mind just how this Lady looks. Excellent read!!
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*hugs* Thanks Lanaia. Emm... ditto here Pheonix (though wasn't actually referencing her, nor any Po version thereof. More of a vampish thing) Thanks much Phoenix. Have a good one... Po
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Po, your writing is a trip, for one must look deeper than casual. I really liked the voice--one I saw as insistent, and perhaps, instructive.. no room for debate; this was it. I liked these lines;...
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""Twinkle-twinkle," I whisper the refrain of a child's rhyme again, I smile darkly as her eye moves quickly back toward and into the mirror-- I can remember now what she sees there deeper within..."...
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ive decided to 'do' you....maybe you'll write better crits of my work..but i grant you that....encroaching obsolescence ...[joking] louis
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See now-- all that would have required is to ask Louis. I am more than willing to do more indepth critiques. Thanks though, much has happened since I wrote this. I hope that your holidays are going...
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i think much has happened for most of us since this write Poet ... the strength and visual clarity of this share are intense and captivating .. but you offer nothing less when posting well done Po ~...
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